英语作文建议信(整理9篇)
英语作文建议信
DearMissWang,
I’mastudentfromGuiZhouExperimentalHighSchool。Ihaveaproblem。IarguedwithmybestfriendLisaforsomeverytinythingsandsaidsomebadwordstoherafewdaysago。Then,wenevertalktoeachotheranymore。Now,Ifeelquitelonelysometimesanddon’twanttolosemybestfriend。Iknowshemustbehurtbymywords,andIamnotsurethatshestillwanttobemyfriendornot?Idowanttochangethissituation,butIdon’tknowhow。Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice。
Yours,
Jim
英语作文建议信篇2
DearMr.Wang,
We’resopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.
Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.Asyouknow,wedidn’tlearnwellenoughinthefirsttwoyears,sopleaseslowdownandmakesurewehavereallymasteredsomething.Besides,weneedalittlemoretimetothinkforourselves.Asforthoseimportantpointswhichalsomakeusconfused,wouldyoupleasegiveusmorepracticeincaseweforget?Meanwhile,weneedyourinstruction,forexample,inhowtowriteinnaturalEnglish.Istillhaveanotherrequest:assignuslesshomeworkinorderthatwecandoitmoreefficiently.
Bytheway,weoftenfeelfrustrated,whichhasaverybadeffectonourstudy.Wewouldappreciateitifyouwouldgiveussomeencouragementfromtimetotime.
英语作文建议信篇3
写作
假如你是李华,你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的`内容给她写封回信。
1.上课认真听讲,做好笔记,课后及时复习;
2.词汇是基础,每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文;
3.课外多与同学用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力;
4.每天坚持写日记。
注意:1.词数120—150词左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;
2.内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
DearWangMei,
I’mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiHua
DearWangMei,
I’mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.N
owI’mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.Firstofall,youshouldlistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclasssothat众所周知),vocabularyisofgreatimportance/essential.Youshouldspendhalfanhourinthemorningrecitingwordsandreadingtextsaloud.What’smore,trytoyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.InthiswayyoucanimproveyourlisteningandspokenEnglishquickly.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldkeepingadiary,whichhelpsimproveyourwrittenEnglishandhelpsyougoover/reviewthewordsandexpressionsthatyouhavelearnt.
Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成/Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”.一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。
Bestwishes!
Yours,LiHua
英语作文建议信篇4
ToWhomItMayConcern,
Iamastudentinthisuniversitywhoregularlycomestothelibrarytospendmysparetime.
Generallyspeaking,theservicesyouofferherearequitegood;however,Ihavesomesuggestionsforyoutoadopt.
AndIwouldliketoextendmygreatestappreciationifyouaresokindastotakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.
Tobeginwith,willyoupleaseprolongthetimeforreading?Inthedaytime,mostofthestudentsarehavingclasses,sotheycan’tcometothelibrary.
Moreover,someofthebooksonshelvesareoutofdate.
Ifyouaresokindastoprovideusconsideration.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
英语作文建议信
建议信(1)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括:
1.菜价昂贵,菜市单一;2.排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3.味道不佳,浪费现象严重。
注意:1.词数不少于120;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:食堂canteenDearPrincipal,
Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!
Yours,LiHua
作文范文:DearPrincipal,
Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.thepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.需注意的词汇、表达:
1.deliciouswaitingtaste(n.味道)tasty(adj.可口的)cook(n.厨师)cooker(n.炊具)
price价格
2.lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格3.atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格4.varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品5.Foronething,…….Foranother,……
6.makesb(not)dosth
7.wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime8.Thekindsoffoodare.表达食堂出现的问题:
9.Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffordthem.
10.Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan’tsatisfyour
needs.
11.Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.12.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttaste.
Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’t
13.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted14.It’sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.
15.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16.Inthelongrun,it’sbadforourhealthandstudy.
17.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表达提出的建议:
18.Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.19.Ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.20.It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.
Soit’shightimeforustotakemeasures
21.Tosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure(形象)andimprovethe
presentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.
22.Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23.Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.
24.AsfarasI’mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.What’smore,
differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.
25.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.
建议模板:Dear….,
I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…….(引出话题).Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpstodosth.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatodosth.
建议句型积累:
1.Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmaybethemost
effectiveones.
2.I’dliketomakesomesuggestionson…….3.It’sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.
It’snecessaryforsbtodosth
4.Itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif…….5.Itcontributes/helpsalotif………6.Isuggestthat…../Mysuggestionisthat…
It’ssuggested/advised/recommendedthat……7.You’dbetterdosth./We’dbetterdosth
It’sbettertodosth
8.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentodosth
Wearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth9.It’shightimethatsbsth./It’shightimeforsbtodosth
建议信(2)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫SadMother的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,用英语给这位家长回复。
I’mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.RecentlyIhavefoundthatmydaughtertoldliestome.Theotherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.HoweverIfoundoutshefailedinmathandEnglish.WhatshouldIdo?
写作要点:
1.表明了解她的问题;2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因;3.提出至少两条建议要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。
Hi,SadMother,
Ihavelearnedthat_____________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
作文范文:Hi,SadMother,
sheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.Besides,nowadays,parentsputtoomuchpressureontheirkids.Inordernottoletyoudown,shelie.
–hearttalkwithher,makingherknowbeinghonestismoreimportantthanscores.Inaddition,don’tbetoostrict.微小的)mistakes.
需要注意积累的`词汇、短语、和句子:
daughter女儿expectation期望beworried/concernedabout担心calmdown冷静下来ataloss迷惑不解keepintouchwith保持联系bestrictwithsbinsth在某方面对某人要求严格heart-to-heart推心置腹的
idea注意想法test测试text文本cheat欺骗wantsbtodosth想让某人做某事
1.Itwasbecauseshedidn’twanttoletyoudownthatshepretendedtoachievehighscores.2.Sheisn’tawarethatthelieshavehurtbothyouandherself.
3.Beingateenager,sheneedstobeencouraged.Andit’syouwhocandothis.4.Itisprobablyyourhighexpectationstoherthatmakesherdecidetolie.
5.Youshouldfigureoutthereasonwhysheliedtoyoubeforesolvingtheproblem.6.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatlyingisbadbehavior.
7.Thereasonwhyshedidn’ttellyouthetruthmaybethatshedidn’twanttoletyoudown.
8.Itissuggestedthatyoushouldhaveaface-to-facetalkwithhersothatshemightopenherhearttoyou.
9.Toavoidthelies,youshouldencourageherratherthanblameherwhenshefailsinexams10.Thereasonthatleadstotheproblemmaybevarious.
11.Confrontedwith(面对)theseproblems,youshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestohelpyoudaughter.
12.AsfarasI’mconcerned,it’sbettertocommunicatewithherinafriendlywaytoletherknowit’swrongtotelllies.
13.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldattachmoreimportancetophysicalandmentalhealth.Moreover,it’sbettertoencouragehertodowhatshewants.改错:
1.Therearesomeadvice.
2.Don’tsad.
3.Youshouldgivehermoreencourage.
4.Shemayafraidthatifshefailsintheexam,youwillpunishher.
5.Ifshehasdifficultyinlearning,youshouldinspiresheandhelpsheout.6.Shedoesn’twantyouangry.7.Pleasenottobesoworried.
8.Oneofthereasonisthatsheisn’tdaretotellyouthetruth.9.Becausesheafraidparents.
10.Soshedon’twanttomentionit.11.Youshouldapologytoher.
12.You’dbettertoencouragehertobeahonestpeople.13.You’dbetterbecareaboutherhealthandstudy.14.I’mveryunderstandyourcondition.15.Shemaydoesn’twantyoutobeangry.
建议信(3)
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;2.提出建议并说明理由。注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:tempern.脾气,情绪HiWorried,
I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.
Yours,JamieHiWorried,
I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,Iquiteunderstandhowyouarefeelingnowandthereisnoneedtoworryaboutitsomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips.
Firstofall,talktosomeoneyoutrustaboutthetroubleyou’refacedwith,whichisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Havingapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou'llsoonbecomecalmerandbetter.
Yours,Jamie
Highlights:
1.First,youaresupposedtofigureoutwhatmakesyouupset,andthenkeepawayfromit.2.What’smore,youaresupposedtotakeanactivepartinoutdooractivitiestorelax.
3.Tosolvetheproblemassoonaspossible,youcanopenyourhearttoagoodfriend,talkingabout
yourtrouble.
4.Carriedbytwo,burdensarelighter.
5.It’shightimethatyoushouldrelieveyourpressure.
6.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentocontrolyourtemper.
7.Thereisnodenyingthateveryonewilllosehistemperwhensomethingunexpectedhappens.8.Insteadofbeingangry,whatisimportantforyouistolearntocontrolyourtemperfromnowon.
9.It’scommonforteenagerslikeyoutoloseyourtemper,whichofcoursewillhaveabadeffectonyournormalstudyandlife.
建议信(4)
高二下期已经过去半学期,高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大,一些同学的正常生活受到影响,如睡眠不好,身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点,给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子,向同学们提出建议,并简述理由或举例说明:
1、劳逸结合;2、健康饮食;3、适当锻炼;4、保持乐观心态。注意:1、短文必须包括所列内容;2、词数120左右;
3、文章开头已给出;4、写成一篇完整的短文,不要逐条列举。
作文范文:
preventingthemsleepingwellandcausingproblemswiththeirhealth.Inordertoimprovethecondition,I’dliketooffersomeadvice.
First,Combineworkwithrest.KeepinmindthatallworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Second,itisimportanttokeepahealthyandbalanceddiet.Stayingawayfromjunkfoodandeatinghealthyfoodlikevegetablesandfishwillbenefityou.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeregularexercise,asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofpressure.Lastbutnotleast,goodhealthmeansbeingbothphysicallyandmentallyhealthy.Keepinganoptimisticstateofmindwillcontributetoagoodphysicalstate.
Isincerelyhopethatthesuggestionsabovewillbeofgreathelptoyou.句型及短语积累:1.Myadviceisasfollows.2.Thefollowingismyadvice.
3.Finally,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.
4.Thenitalsohelpstotakeproperexercise.Notonlycanitstrengthenyourhealth,butalsoitcanmakeyoufeelrelaxed.
5.Gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasitisaneffectivewaytokeephealthy.6.Second,youmayaswelltakesomeexercise,whichisagoodwaytokeephealthy.
7.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeexercise.Notonlycanithelpstudentskeephealthy,butalsoitisagoodwaytoreducepressure.
8.Firstofall,Ithinkitisagoodideatocombinestudyandagoodrest,whichcanhelpuskeepenergeticandactive.
9.Second,youaresupposedtoeathealthyfoodasitwillofferstudentsenoughenergy.
10.Inaddition,youmusteathealthyfoodsoastokeepfit,whichisofgreatimportancetoyourstudy.11.Asanoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”.
12.Gonearethedayswhenwewereatsenior2andthesenior3issayinghellotous.
13.Goouttobreathefreshairandrelaxyourbrain.
14.Keepingahealthydietisessentialtoyou,whichhelpsyoukeepfit.
15.ThemostimportantthingIthinkistoseekforthebalancebetweenstudyandpleasure.
16.keepabalancebetweenstudyandrelaxation17.keepfit/healthykeep(in)goodhealth
keepingoodcondition/shapekeepinagoodstateofhealth18.withtimegoingby/astimegoesby19.takeexercise纠错:
1.Exerciseeverydaysothatyouwillbemuchstronger.2.remainaoptimisticattitudetowardslife
3.Eatmorevegetables,whichcanstrengthyourhealth.4.Inaddition,haveabalanceddietcankeepyourhealth.5.Onlyifyoubelieveinyourselfyoucancarryonasnormal.6.takegoodrest
7.Underpressureofstudy,notonlydoourlivesaffected,butalsoweareinpoorcondition.(两处错)
8.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticisagoodwaytoliftyourspirits.9.Takingexerciseproperlycontributestomakeyoufullofenergy.10.Youshouldeatsomethingwhichagreeswithyou.
11.Atthesametime,wearefacedwithmuchstressthatresultsinmanystudentscan’tsleepwell.
12.Herearesomeadviceonhowtosolveit.
13.Onlyyouensureenoughnutritioncanyoustudybetter.
14.Finally,keepanoptimisticattitudetolife,itwillbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过去式,过去分词,现在分词)occur---______________---______________---__________
英语作文建议信篇6
Dearmaster:
Ihavesomeadviseaboutournewclassrules.
Imustsaytheserulesareuseful,andtheyaregood.
Buttomyself,Ilikelistentothemusicafterclass,butthefirstruleofournewclassruleis"Don'tlistentomusicorhavesnacksinclassroom",itmakemeverysad.Idon'tthinkthatlistentothemusicwillinflunce
Mystudylife,what'smore,itcanrelaxmyself.SoIthinkwecanlistentothemusicafterclass,ofcourse,we
Won'tcontinuittothenextclass.
Andotherpart,I'dlovetoplaybasketball,it'sgoodtoourhealth,butifwe"Don'tstayatschoolafter4:30p.m.",Iwillhavenotimetoplaybasketball.
Ihavetroublesontheseparts,andIthinkitpresentmanystudents'problems,soIwanttobegaveanswers,thankyou.
Ihopeournewclassrulescanmakeourclassrisetoahigherplace.
英语作文建议信篇7
建议信写作
一、基础写作的内容分类
1.应用文(欢迎词,建议信,投诉信,应聘信,日记,通知,便条,遗失招领启事,海报)
2.人物写照
3.地方介绍
4.调查报告(2007广东卷:谁是你的偶像)
5.事物介绍(2008广东卷:奥运比赛项目射击)
6.新闻采访(2009近视问题;2010政府禁烟)
7.看图写作(社会现象或寓言、成语故事)
8.图表说明(表格,柱状图,曲线图,扇形图
如:近10年我国私人汽车拥有量的变化)
二、实例分析(2010深圳五校联考基础写作)
在紧张的高三备考阶段,各校为了确保教学质量,除了早读和晚自习以外,每天至少要上9节课,甚至周末都要上课,学生们有大量的作业要完成,感到非常疲倦。为此,校学生会根据学生的实际情况,给校长写了封信,表达你们的需求和建议。
a)适当减少课时,留出思考时间b)反复训练重要、易错知识点,培养能力c)减少作业量以保证质量d)少些批评,多些鼓励
注意:短文开头已给出(不算入要求的5句话里)。
No.42ZhongshanRoad,
ShenzhenCity,Guangdong
China
June8,2012
1)Inordertoguaranteetheteachingqualityinthecourseofthegeneralrevision,weseniorthreestudentsatleasthave9periodseachdayapartfrommorningandeveningclasses.2)Besides,wehavegotalotofhomeworktodo,whichmakesusexhausted.3)Accordingtotherealsituationofusstudents,wethinkthatitisnecessarytoreducetheamountofperiodsandleaveustimetothinkbyourselves.4)Meanwhile,giveusmorepracticeonthoseimportantandconfusingpointstocultivateourabilitytodealwithproblems.5)Furthermore,reducedailyhomeworktoassurethequalityandgiveuslesscriticismbutmoreencouragement,whichwethinkwillbebeneficialtousall.Yours
Students’Union
讨论:
1.建议信的内容安排
信头____________________________________________________________________称呼____________________________________________________________________第1,2句__________________第3,4,5句__________________
结束语__________________________________________________________________签名____________________________________________________________________
2.时态__________________3.人称__________________
4.语言特征__________________
技巧点拨
1.概念:建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。
2.分类:
1)写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;
2)写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。
3.内容安排:1)开门见山地写出写信的原因、背景;2)建议的内容及提出建议的理由
4.语言特征:
1)建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
2)提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。
5.注意事项
1)建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力
2)建议的角度要多样化,避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。
3)符合英文信件的基本格式
4)语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。
三、常用写作句型
1.表对对方的情况表示理解,并乐意帮忙:
I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…
I’mverygladtohearthatyouwantto…andgiveyousomesuggestionsonhowto…
Itismypleasuretodo…I’mwillingtogiveahandtoyou.
AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…
Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter
Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----
Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.
Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…
Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.
Thanksfortrustingme.Regarding…,I’dliketomakesomesuggestions.
2.提建议的句式
Itisuseful/helpful/important/necessary…foryoutodo…
Itshouldbeagoodideaforyoutodo…
Itwillcertainlyhelpalottodosth/Italsohelpstodosth
Itdoesharmtosb/sth=Itisharmfulto…
…benefits…=…bebeneficialto…=…dogoodto…
Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…
Inmyopinion,itwouldbebetterifyoudo…
AsfarasI’mconcerned/Asforme,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.
Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…
IfIwereyou,Iwould…
Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowingtips.
Ifeelthatitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…
Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould…
Youmayconsiderdoing…
3.表意见并列的连词
表先后次序:
First,second,third….Finally
Firstly,secondly,…eventually
tobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast
递进关系:
furthermore;moreover;besides;meanwhile;inotherwords;
atthesametime;
4.建议信结尾常用句式
Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.
Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.
Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.
Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.
Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.
Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.
Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterinfurtherdetails.
Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthismatter.
Ifyouhaveanymoreproblem,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeatanytime.
I’mwillingtodiscussthismatterwithyouwheneveryouneed.
四、写作模板
广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观
众的英语节目,新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在,John就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。
[写作内容]
假如你是学生李华,建议开办“广州全接触”(All-roundGuangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信:
DearJohn,
Iknowyou’regoingtosetupanEnglishprogramformiddleschoolstudents.SoI’mwritingtosuggestaprogram—“All-roundGuangzhou”.
...
Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsideration.
Sincerelyyours,
LiHua
[例题导写]
①节目包括广州的.历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人。
②建议每周六、日举办,方便学生周末观看。
③建议邀请中学生参加节目,激发学生的收看兴趣。
④这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化,还有助于提高中学生的英语水平,这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。
⑤我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。
词语翻译翻译或完成下列词或短语。
句1:
cover/include(1)包括……(节目)_____________
(2)历史,教育,景点,饮食,名人
History,education,scenicspots/touristattractions,food,famouspeople/celebrities____________________________________________________________
句3:
(3)激发某人的兴趣spark/stimulate/arouseone’sinterest____________________________________
句4:improveone’sEnglish(4)提高英语水平______________________
句5:
(5)受到欢迎bepopularamong/withsb./bewell-receivedby/bewelcomedby______________________________________
3、难句翻译。翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。
句2:(1)(这个节目将于)每周六、日(播放)。
(1)Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekends./Isuggestthattheprogrambebroadcastonweekends./Itisagoodideatobroadcastitonweekends.
2)方便学生周末观看。
(2)Westudentscanhavethechancetowatchit./Itwillbeconvenientforusstudentstowatchit.合并:Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekendssothatwestudentscanhavethechancetowatchit.(因果关系,可以使用so...that...句型)
句3:(3)(你也可以)邀请中学生参加节目。
(3)Youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedin/takepartintheprogram.
(4)(这个节目可以)提高学生的收看兴趣。
(4)Itwillsurelyarouse/spark/stimulateotherstudents’interestinit.
合并:Youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedin/takepartinthe
program,whichwillsurelyarouse/spark/stimulateotherstudents’interestinit.(补充说明关系,可以使用which非限制性定语从句)
句4:(5)(这个节目帮助)中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。
(5)ThisprogramcangetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhou.
(6)(中学生可以)向外国游客介绍广州。
(6)ThestudentscanintroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.
(7)(这个节目)有助于提高中学生的英语水平。
(7)ThisprogramhelpsstudentsimprovetheirEnglish.
并:NotonlywillthisprogramhelpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish,butalsogetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhousoastointroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.(第5个句子和第7个句子是并列关系,因此我们可以用notonly...butalso...这组连词把它们连接起来,并且注意统一主语,第6句是作者提出建议的原因,可以用soasto引导出目的状语。)
4、连句成篇。把句子合并成篇章的时候,需要注意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表示来信的目的,如:Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesuggestions./Thanksfortrustingme./Regarding...,I’dliketomakesomesuggestions等句型。在表示建议的时候,很多同学习惯使用祈使句或者Youshould的句型表示建议,这样比较生硬,因此可以转换不同的句型使语言丰富,如可以使用Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif.../Iwouldliketosuggestthat...等句型。另外,若是使用虚拟语气的句子IfIwereyou,Iwould...,也会让文章增色不少。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候,可以用简明扼要的句型,如wishyougoodluck/wishyousuccess/mayyousucceed,使文章长短句结合得当。
DearJohn,
Iknowyou’regoingtosetupanEnglishprogramformiddleschoolstudents.SoI’mwritingtosuggestaprogram—“All-roundGuangzhou”.Thisprogramwillcovertopicslikethehistory,education,famousscenicspots,foodandfamouspeopleofGuangzhou.Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekendssothatwestudentscanhavethechancetowatchit.
Besides,youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedintheprogram,whichwillsurelyarouseotherstudents’interestinit.NotonlywillthisprogramhelpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish,butalsogetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhousoastointroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.Iamsureitwillbewell-receivedbythemiddleschoolstudents.Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsideration.
Sincerelyyours,
LiHua
5、检查修改:词(拼写、用法),句(结构、表达),篇(连贯、书写)
六、能力提高
ToWhomItMayConcern
英语作文建议信篇8
DearJack,
I'vereceivedyoure-mailandI'mgladtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnChinese.
First,youshouldbeconfident.Aswe'vefound,successfullanguagelearnerssharequiteafewcharacteristics:self-confidence,curiosityandwillingnesstoexperimentwithdifferentwaysoflearning.Besides,doingalotofreadingisnecessary,andyoucanenlargeyourvocabularyatthesametime.Mostimportantly,don'tmisseveryopportunitytocommunicatewithothersinChinese,anddon'tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Themoreyouuseit,thebetteryou'llmasterit!
GoodluckinyourChinesestudy!
Yours,
LiHua
英语作文建议信篇9
Deareditor:Ihavereadalotofarticlesintheschoolmagazine.Ifoundthatalmostallthearticlesintheschoolmagazineareaboutthedailyaffairsoncampus,whichisgoodforustounderstandeverythingoncampus.
ButIthinkitwouldbebetterifthereweresomearticlesandlearningmethodsaboutcurrentevents.
CurrenteventscanopentheeyesofstudentsandlearnmoreaboutsharingtheworldIhopeyoucanfindthesesuggestionsusefulandputthemintopracticeassoonaspossible.
Yoursincerity,LiLei.




